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Falconer
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 Posted: Thu Sep 16, 2004 8:10 pm Post subject: Attack on governor thread too complicated? |
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Howdy peeps, question for you all.
The attack on the governor thread has got some excellent stuff in it. We have lots of stuff lined up for it, but it's moving very slowly. I can;t remember who, but someone said he was lost in the RP stuff and I know someone else replied he had the same.
There are ways to give gentle nudges towards possible continuations which we could start using, but that only helps if you are still interested in the story. If it's the story that's causing you to loose interest, then let us know too, we'll come up with something new.  |
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| Posted: Thu Sep 16, 2004 9:42 pm Post subject: |
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I think it's fine Falc. Some gentle nudges would be nice, as I often feel uncomfortable about moving the story along in one post too much, in case it sucks.
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| Posted: Thu Sep 16, 2004 11:11 pm Post subject: |
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I too think its OK Falc. The only reason I can see for it moving slowly are the number of participants in the current situation. A number of characters (in particular Pirate di Rossi and Will Scarlett) have left the scene and that leaves less characters to continue the Governors attack story.
More characters = quicker progression of the story.
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| Posted: Fri Sep 17, 2004 7:15 am Post subject: |
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There's a post in the gov thread from me leaving 'Mahli' right open to jump in and move the story along, if that's how you want to do it.
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| Posted: Fri Sep 17, 2004 1:58 pm Post subject: |
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If you can, make sure the galleon (or at least its captian) escapes somehow... working over the draft for my second voyage, it is a rather important component to it... I mean, if the Galleon escapes, then everything is over for the attack on the Governors mansion
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Falconer
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| Posted: Fri Sep 17, 2004 5:07 pm Post subject: |
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Will do Chuko. |
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Chuko
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| Posted: Sun Sep 19, 2004 3:59 am Post subject: |
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Storys all wrapped up, Galleon escapes, no one can persue it due to the wreck in the harbour... Hope nobody minds me jumping in and finishing things off, do they?
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| Posted: Sun Sep 19, 2004 4:15 am Post subject: |
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Nope, nicely done. Clean ending too, but the Admiral is alive for your next story.
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| Posted: Sun Sep 19, 2004 6:09 am Post subject: |
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Yep, great ending and as you introduced that ship, only fitting that you should write it. Good to introduce (one of) the reason(s) for them being there and the fact that they have their own secret base.
I suggest people can still post in the attack thread, but please, keep the timeline close to this event. Phase 2 will be started soon! |
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Chuko
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| Posted: Sun Sep 19, 2004 9:03 am Post subject: |
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| Falconer wrote: | Yep, great ending and as you introduced that ship, only fitting that you should write it. Good to introduce (one of) the reason(s) for them being there and the fact that they have their own secret base.
I suggest people can still post in the attack thread, but please, keep the timeline close to this event. Phase 2 will be started soon! |
That perticular secret base comes in to be very important in my next story... er voyage (starting on Friday).
Cant wait to see what phase two is about...
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